It is a Critical Response to a Short Story written by Patricia Grace
I wrote it as an example of how to critically respond to a character in a story.
One of my learning goals was to analyse a character from a short story and give evidence from the text to support my judgements and comments about the character.
I achieved this because
Teacher Comment
This is a well written Critical Response. You have clearly identified different character traits that represent 'Mum' and given evidence from the text to back up your judgements. The paragraphs are well sequenced and ideas are linked to main idea in paragraph. There has been good attention made with spelling and punctuation.
This is a well written Critical Response. You have clearly identified different character traits that represent 'Mum' and given evidence from the text to back up your judgements. The paragraphs are well sequenced and ideas are linked to main idea in paragraph. There needs to be closer attention made with spelling and punctuation.
This is a well written Critical Response. You have clearly identified different character traits that represent 'Mum' and given evidence from the text to back up your judgements. An attempt has been made to use paragraphing however some ideas cross over or do not link clearly with main idea of paragraph.
Thank you for your critical response. You have identified some different character traits that represent 'Mum' however you need to link these ideas more closely with evidence from the text. Remember to back up what you are saying by using direct quotations or referring to text.
Unfortunately this critical response is more of a recount of the story rather than responding to a character. For example
My Writing is called 'It Used to be Green Once'
It is a Critical Response to a Short Story written by Patricia Grace
I wrote it as an example of how to critically respond to a character in a story.
One of my learning goals was to analyse a character from a short story and give evidence from the text to support my judgements and comments about the character.
I achieved this because
Teacher Comment
This is a well written Critical Response. You have clearly identified different character traits that represent 'Mum' and given evidence from the text to back up your judgements. The paragraphs are well sequenced and ideas are linked to main idea in paragraph. There has been good attention made with spelling and punctuation.
This is a well written Critical Response. You have clearly identified different character traits that represent 'Mum' and given evidence from the text to back up your judgements. The paragraphs are well sequenced and ideas are linked to main idea in paragraph. There needs to be closer attention made with spelling and punctuation.
This is a well written Critical Response. You have clearly identified different character traits that represent 'Mum' and given evidence from the text to back up your judgements. An attempt has been made to use paragraphing however some ideas cross over or do not link clearly with main idea of paragraph.
Thank you for your critical response. You have identified some different character traits that represent 'Mum' however you need to link these ideas more closely with evidence from the text. Remember to back up what you are saying by using direct quotations or referring to text.
Unfortunately this critical response is more of a recount of the story rather than responding to a character. For example